Today after our media lesson I, Edward and Esma stayed behind for an hour to finnish off our storyboard re-draft. We recieved feedback that our storyboard seemed to abrupt and obvious and there wasnt any intersting enough camera techniques. There needed to be more tilts, pans etc.So we went back to our storyboard and picked out shots that we weren't completley satispied with and felt was too bland. We looked at differnt ways in which we could shoot the shot. for example one shot was of Delilah walking down the stairs, what we understood was a better way of showing this, in a more interesting way would be shooting the shot through the banister on the stairs.
heres a picture which is very close to the shot we got in mind. through a shot like this we would see Delilah comming downstairs.

I met up with my group to during half term to finnish off the stroyboard. before we started we discussed again the treatment and read over our script to confirm it was final and brush up on any problems. We were ready to start making it into a storyboard and began by discussing every shot one by one and noting down as a list what every shot will include, so we noted briefly for every shot the location, the main props, body language, facial expressions and basically the mise en scene of every shot. after we organised all the shots into order we decided to begin drawing it out so we can see if it visually meets our imaginations.


