Treatment 2

The edge of a dying romance

A Mans best friend

this story revolves around the world of a man 'FRANK' and a dog 'LACY'. there is a strong bond between an slightly aged male and his very old dog as they have been together for longer then he can remember. LACY is everything to FRANK, thought to be inseperable. the dog is his only and most trusted, reliable and affectionate companion who looks after him in his frail condition as FRANK is blind. however, LACY soon falls ill and it's mind begins to deteriorate, an accident triggers the dogs condition into a huge turn of events. LACY becomes too ill and suffers with a mental conditon, she becomes weak and cannot lead FRANK to places. in it's state of health LACYS' personality dies and it becomes vicious and too violent and ill to live with and look after. the heartbreaking moment comes where FRANK has to let go of his one and only lifetime companion and part from it forever, as LACY is too old and frail too live, he has to leave his best friend to it's death.

Treatment 1

Today we met as a whole group and came up picked the two best drafter ideas to make a treatment out of.

Here is the first draft of what we thought our story to be.



And from that i made the treatment;

A woman caught up in her own vanity and selfishness strings a number of men along in her multiple love affairs, in secret, they develop strong feelings for her and desire a life to commit to with her which she cannot accept but however cannot give reasons why. This confusion as to why she cannot, for each man becomes the drive which leads them to find out what has been going on, that they are not the only one. it leads to all three of them breaking up with her. the link between the bonds of the men and the woman is shown through a red thread to show there linked thorugh the start but become tangled and broken at the end.