As a group, before meeting up on the weekend and comming up with only two treatments together, we decided to write our own one or two treatments on any quote and then present it to the group on the weeking so we can decide on the best one and make a two solid treatments out the best two drafts or sketches of the group.
my first treatment draft:
The edge of a dying romance
A Mans best friend
this story revolves around the world of a man 'FRANK' and a dog 'LACY'. there is a strong bond between an slightly aged male and his very old dog as they have been together for longer then he can remember. LACY is everything to FRANK. the dog is his only and most trusted, reliable and affectionate companion who looks after him in his frail condition as FRANK is blind.
however, LACY soon falls ill and it's mind begins to deteriorate, an accident triggers the dogs condition into a huge turn of events. LACY becomes too ill and suffers with a mental conditon, she becomes weak and cannot lead FRANK to places. in it's state of health LACYS' personality dies and it becomes vicious and not the same. the heartbreaking moment comes where FRANK has to let go of his one and only lifetime companion and part from it forever, as LACY is too old and frail too live.
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