Wednesday 13 October 2010

Treatment (3rd draft)

Tag line: 'The cruelest lies are often told in silence'.
- 'Robert Louis Stevenson'
Pitch:
This 'Woman' is a 19-20 year old girl, she is romantically involved with 3 men at the same time without behind their back. She uses them like a puppeteer, to enhance her vanity and gain attention in the interest of her own selfishness. However what she doesn't realise is her lies are tampering with the red strings of fate she has made with the men, and how easily they can break.

Story:'Woman' is first seen in an abstract shot attatched to the TWO men
she begins to get dressed and pamper herself with all her beautifying products, enhancing her vanity with all the perfum and make up she wraps herself up in, hints on her superficial personality. Opens her cupboard and then closes it, mirror on the cupboard reflects her dressed into the cloths already (red clothes). we look at the photos of the men on the wall. she then starts to daydream and drift pre-occupies herself in the thoughts of being intimate with the men. we then flashback to reality with the awakening of her dreams with the sound of a door bell. she goes downstairs and set

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