Here is the first draft of what we thought our story to be.
And from that i made the treatment;
A woman caught up in her own vanity and selfishness strings a number of men along in her multiple love affairs, in secret, they develop strong feelings for her and desire a life to commit to with her which she cannot accept but however cannot give reasons why. This confusion as to why she cannot, for each man becomes the drive which leads them to find out what has been going on, that they are not the only one. it leads to all three of them breaking up with her. the link between the bonds of the men and the woman is shown through a red thread to show there linked thorugh the start but become tangled and broken at the end.
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